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Maybe I didn’t want to die. We’ve
all heard the stories of people planning to kill themselves but then backing
out at the last minute.
Maybe that’s me.
Not good enough to live, not good
enough to die.
. . . .
(Oh, yes. Four sentences. We'll say it's in honor of Tobias.)
♥
Bekah Joan
Oh, I love it! That last sentence, though... So much intensity in so little words. Is it in Austin's POV?
ReplyDeleteThank you! And yes, it is from Austin's POV.
DeleteI don't want to die, but I first want to live a life, and I want to live my life wall with lots of love, happiness joy, laughter, satisfaction, and lots of Gods love. Then I wont mind to die because I want to see God, and my life will be something good to remember. What about you? :) Nice post Bekah. ;)
ReplyDeleteGrace xxx ♥
Yes, I do agree with you, Grace. I want to live a life full of life, if you know what I mean.
DeleteI like it, Bekah. I think it's a much more interesting opening than your third-person POV.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ajax! And I agree. I like this better.
DeleteHaven't read this book yet but I'm gonna todayyy....yayyy!
ReplyDeleteTane ♥
Wait...my book or Allegiant?
Deletevery interesting post! :D I post on blogger also... http://whensummermetwintersmile.blogspot.com it would mean a lot to me if you could check it out and possibly follow...? :) thank you!
ReplyDeleteThanks! And of course I'll check out your blog! :)
DeleteThat was so beautiful... like, oh my goodness. you are amazing!
ReplyDeletexoxo,
Mackenzie
Thank you, Mackenzie! :)
DeleteAhh, I love it! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mary! :)
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